I'm so amazed! How long did it take you to write all that out? You have paid really good attention to all the little details included in the story, I'm very impressed! I feel like you have told me the entire story all over again, not just the summary, and I thank you for that because I got the enjoy the story for another time!
I've counted, and you've given us twenty terrific sentences instead of six to eight! Your writing is very detailed and descriptive, I couldn't have asked you for more! Overall, did you enjoy this story? It's very creative isn't it? The most interesting part of the story to me was when Metai's brothers began to lose their looks, something that was so important to them, just because they got distracted by the looks of someone else. It really teaches you a lesson about appreciating what you already have, don't you think? Who's your favourite character and what was the best part of the story for you?
You really are a star, Katelynn, keep soaring high!! ☆☆☆
Hey Katelynn,
ReplyDeleteI'm so amazed! How long did it take you to write all that out? You have paid really good attention to all the little details included in the story, I'm very impressed! I feel like you have told me the entire story all over again, not just the summary, and I thank you for that because I got the enjoy the story for another time!
I've counted, and you've given us twenty terrific sentences instead of six to eight! Your writing is very detailed and descriptive, I couldn't have asked you for more! Overall, did you enjoy this story? It's very creative isn't it? The most interesting part of the story to me was when Metai's brothers began to lose their looks, something that was so important to them, just because they got distracted by the looks of someone else. It really teaches you a lesson about appreciating what you already have, don't you think? Who's your favourite character and what was the best part of the story for you?
You really are a star, Katelynn, keep soaring high!! ☆☆☆
Best,
Evelyn :)