Thursday 14 May 2015

Dear Diary

Right now we are in our boat sailing to Gallipoli to  fight the Turkish. Now we are in are trench ready to start fighting and bombing everyone.All i can see around  me is people getting shot people  getting bombed and getting illness's .I can even here the larks crying above me .I am really dirty and my best friend just got blone up by the Turkish soldiers .

By katelynn

6 comments:

  1. Nice Katelynn I love your Dear Diary Katelynn BEST FRIEND

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  2. Nice Katelynn I love your Dear Diary Katelynn BEST FRIEND

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  3. thanks larea your the best best buddy

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  6. Hi katelynn
    I like your dear diary I could not really read it though because of all of the colours
    bye for now heidi

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