Ruby here from the Summer Learning Journey team! Good work with the letter! I like where you have said that you learned how to say 'kia ora' on the trip over. You have done a good job of telling us what happened on your journey over, what you did, and what you saw.
Could you tell us some more about how you felt about arriving in a new land? Think about how the first settlers to New Zealand would have felt. Do you think they would have been scared?
I look forward to reading more of your blog over summer. Cheers, Ruby.
Hi Katelynn,
ReplyDeleteJust letting you know that I have sent a request to access your letter on google drive so I can have a read and write you a comment!
I'm looking forward to seeing what you've done :)
Ellee
Hi Katelynn,
ReplyDeleteRuby here from the Summer Learning Journey team!
Good work with the letter! I like where you have said that you learned how to say 'kia ora' on the trip over. You have done a good job of telling us what happened on your journey over, what you did, and what you saw.
Could you tell us some more about how you felt about arriving in a new land? Think about how the first settlers to New Zealand would have felt. Do you think they would have been scared?
I look forward to reading more of your blog over summer.
Cheers,
Ruby.