Finish the story down below with 8 - 10 sentences
One day you are walking along the deck of the ship when you hear a loud bang. You start to run as you see smoke coming from the far end of the ship. You run towards the room where your patients are waiting to receive treatment from the doctor. Just as you arrive at the door to their room you hear another loud bang and you...
Open the door and tell everyone to get to the other side of the boat and stay calm. After everyone is out of the medical room you realise that flames have started and the officers have started blowing up the blow up boats! Elderly people start climbing down and onto the boats and soo on. I'm beginning to think everyone is a little scared.
When everyone gets back to shore docotors are running around like mad giving people check up's, giving out blankets and someone is standing up on a stand telling jokes to cheer people up. I myself are a little scared it's kind of reminded me of the titanic.
2 hours have gone by and everyone has safely gotten home. I don't think ANYONE that was on that boat today will get any sleep tonight.
I would really want to know what started the flames and the big BANGS? I might have to ask one of the constables tommorrow morning but for now goodnight.
Hi Katelynn!
ReplyDeleteWhat an exciting story you have written ...it's funny you said later in your story that it reminded you of the Titanic because when you were talking about getting the life boats ready and letting the elderly on I was thinking the same thing!
I also like that once you got back to shore there was someone there to tell patients jokes to calm the situation down, very smart idea!
I am interested also to hear what caused the flames and loud bangs on your boat....maybe you were under attack?
This is a very imaginative story Katelynn and I like the way you have told a full story of what happened including once you were off the boat too.
Great job Katelynn!
Ellee :)