My Poem
The excitement in our bodys as the plane landed.
Families screaming and yelling!
So excited to see there loved ones.
The trip was long but short
The late nights and early mornings
Making us tired
We finally arrived home! Yay!
Kia Ora Katelynn it Kaleb here from your class last year.
ReplyDeleteWell done this is a great poem. This reminds me of when I wrote a poem last year in class.
How would fell if this happens to you and you were on the plane screaming and yelling to see you family???
Kai Pai Katelynn. :)
Kia Ora Katelynn it is Riley here from Grey Main.
ReplyDeleteI like you poem about crossing the Tasman.
Would you like to be o the plane?
This reminds me when i wrote a poem in room 8.
Hi Katelynn!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really great poem about the trip across the Tasman!
Sounds like you might have had some practise at writing poems in class? What other poems have you written?
I really like the ending: "We finally arrived home! Yay!" I think that I would have felt so thankful to land after a ride like that....I might even be kissing the ground! What do you think the first thing they might have done would be? I think I would want to eat a big meal with my family and friends.
Thank you for sharing your poem Katelynn!
Ellee :)