I really enjoyed reading your story about the events that happened after the acid rain had stopped. You've included many small details which all work together to make your story seem very realistic, excellent work! It's horrible to hear that your town was hit by the acid rain the most but thankfully it didn't happen in real life. That's the beauty and adventure of creative writing, isn't it? You can take yourself and the people around you to the places and events that your imagination takes you to!
I love that you have added speech and dialogue for the people in this story, it's helpful to know what's on their minds and we also get to know them a bit better through what they are saying. I wonder what the elderly couple did after they saw what had happened to their vegetable garden... Have you seen The Grinch before? If you have, did you like it? I completely agree with what mum said at the end, you're a really positive and optimistic girl! :)
Hello Katelynn,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story about the events that happened after the acid rain had stopped. You've included many small details which all work together to make your story seem very realistic, excellent work! It's horrible to hear that your town was hit by the acid rain the most but thankfully it didn't happen in real life. That's the beauty and adventure of creative writing, isn't it? You can take yourself and the people around you to the places and events that your imagination takes you to!
I love that you have added speech and dialogue for the people in this story, it's helpful to know what's on their minds and we also get to know them a bit better through what they are saying. I wonder what the elderly couple did after they saw what had happened to their vegetable garden... Have you seen The Grinch before? If you have, did you like it? I completely agree with what mum said at the end, you're a really positive and optimistic girl! :)
Happy blogging,
Evelyn :)
Hello Susie!
DeleteI have only seen the grinch in the movie!
Katelynn